Under a goldenrod eye,
armies of cloud-men strut by
flanked by a blue damselfly
streamers of flags in the sky.
armies of cloud-men strut by
flanked by a blue damselfly
streamers of flags in the sky.
Note: This was my third attempt (the first two were hideously trite) at a tanaga, a four-line Filipino poetic form that traditionally had an A-A-A-A rhyme scheme and a syllable count of 7-7-7-7.
Photo credit: sahua d, via flickr //CC BY 2.0
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