Showing posts with label Sedoka. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Sedoka. Show all posts

Wednesday, January 20, 2010

Impasse

I learned about Sedoka last night over at Joseph Harker's poetry blog, naming constellations, so I wanted to try one. According to AllPoetry.com, a Sedoka is a poem with the syllabic form 5/7/7 5/7/7, where each stanza (or, more accurately, katauta) comes at the same subject from different perspectives. I thought it would be fun to try one, which is how I came to write Impasse.


such impassive frost
devours heat from my soul
snow-bitten, withered, I lie

you lie before me
imposter, super-imposed
yourself, burnt in effigy



Photo credit: Gordana Adamovic-Mladenovic, via flickr // CC BY 2.0